An immersive story with very detailed scene description and vivid characters . I tried to collect all the information from the space. Really like your choice of the red texts and the “mirror effect”. Looking forward to see different endings!
This story is so good! It leaves the player wanting to know where Charlie is, what the player did to him, and whose birthday is it? This game is super engaging and interesting, and I love the way the characters are introduced. The blur text effect is super cool as well as the way the passages change once you've interacted with them. There are some grammar and spelling mistakes in the passages but you can still understand what is being presented to you. Love the "knocking" text changing colors and shaking.
The story is so engaging! I really appreciate the effort you put into building up the world in the story that makes me feel like I am actually inside the house. The details that you put in are really good, too, such as the blurry text, and the option would turn to purple after I pressed on it.
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An immersive story with very detailed scene description and vivid characters . I tried to collect all the information from the space. Really like your choice of the red texts and the “mirror effect”. Looking forward to see different endings!
This story is so good! It leaves the player wanting to know where Charlie is, what the player did to him, and whose birthday is it? This game is super engaging and interesting, and I love the way the characters are introduced. The blur text effect is super cool as well as the way the passages change once you've interacted with them. There are some grammar and spelling mistakes in the passages but you can still understand what is being presented to you. Love the "knocking" text changing colors and shaking.
The amazing narrative you have, and great effects, can't wait for the next chapter!!
It was smooth to get inside the story and with its flow.
There are some small spelling errors (maybe), but its very small it does not really distract the whole flow of your story.
LOVE IT
The story is so engaging! I really appreciate the effort you put into building up the world in the story that makes me feel like I am actually inside the house. The details that you put in are really good, too, such as the blurry text, and the option would turn to purple after I pressed on it.